Hi, my name is Dasha
Hi, my name is Dasha. I’m 16 years old and I want to be a writer. I’ve chosen this site, because my dad advised me to publish here my tails. All my stories are my own fantasy , I made all of this up.
My history starts in 2012, when I decided to write my first story. I wrote this tail as a joke for my best friend and then all my friends enjoyed it and asked me to write another tail. Since that all my characters have become more realistic and more interesting (as my friends told me). Two years later I became interested in tv-serials, and I started to write fanfictions about my favorite characters and about some famous people. But it was too boring and it wasn’t a story, it was just a shallow. And then I found a lot of material, which I threw away long time ago, and started to work on them. Actually, after this experience, my characters changed a lot. They became a normal people with faces of famous people, but with my own temper. For me it became easier to make stories and to discuss them with my friend, because I could show them the real person’s face and they could say that they like or dislike the “face” of the character.
I want to show an example of my work. Actually, it is my first work.
Chapter 1. School
Young girl with red, wavy hair arrived into strange house. The house was old, big and for normal people, this house was ruins with high fir-trees. But for this girl, it was a huge building, which was lying on the enormous territory. There was a garden and a forest with a small lake in it. The garden was so beautiful, so students from the first grade thought, that it was garden from heaven, but nobody could go to this garden. Because, it belonged to the dragon, who don’t want any foreigners in their own property.
The dragon was smaller and weaker, because he was albino. His main power was poisonous breath, which kills immediately and no one has a chance to escape. But, this dragon doesn’t like to kill anybody, so he studies in the same school as the girl with red hair. And the dragons name is Vlliris.
Welcome, Dasha! Good luck in writting!
wellcome
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Welcome! A friend and I are putting together a new studio and are working on a few screenplays right now. Be sure to follow along and hit us with any suggestions and feedback that comes to mind. :)
Keep writing! Good luck!
Hi Dasha, welcome to Steemit!
Thanks for publishing the start of your story here. I like tales about dragons! I wonder what will happen next. I hope you keep posting chapters of your story for us!
Thank you for reading! I'm happy that you enjoyed my tale. I'll certainly continue writing
I really hate to pick up on grammatical errors, mainly because I also tend to misspell when I type fast, but somehow I feel like I should tell you that it's spelled "tale", and that "I'm happy that you enjoyed my tail" may have a totally different meaning in English.
That being said, I enjoyed your story and loved the part about the albino dragon :)
Welcome to steemit Dasha!
Thank you very much for your correction.
Keep it going! :) It seems you will have a great success at a young age and welcome to Steemit!
I love stories. Wish you all the best writing!
Welcome to Steemit, Dasha! Did you do the art at the bottom? It's an awesome drawing! :D
No, unfortunately not. I'm not so good at drawing. I've found it in the Internet.
Welcome to the Steem platform!