RE: Alien Life - What Is Your Truth? - IFC Finals - Third Round
Your thoughts are very well organized here. It is like you 'storyboarded' your post. This was extremely easy to read. The markdown was used appropriately and moderately, which really helps with the flow of the post.
A few things that would really help make this even better is an intro video. The way you introduced the post was really good. As I read it, I could hear suspenseful music and was imagining far out space alien stuff as you read that part to the audience. Yeah I saw your comment saying you were busy and wanted to spend more time on the post, so I am just imagining how much more awesome you could have made this!
I really cant get over how great of a flow this post has. Thought organization is my weak point, I find myself rambling and jumping around, so I really admire that about this post. Your skills as a writer is amazing and I wish I had your ability to organize thoughts into a great read for the reader that can easily be understood.
Thank you for this awesome post!
P.S.
- A picture of Lucky dressed as an Alien trying to abduct you as your sleeping you would have been funny!😄
Sorry for the late response but thanks a lot for the advice and kind words. I am glad you mentioned a video for this one to help make it better. I had a video explaining the cattle mutilation but took it out. Suspenseful music would have a really nice touch!
An abduction by him would have been hilarious for an ending of this post 😂