IELTS WRITING PRACTICE II WRITING 1

From the table above, the percentage of Secondary schoolchildren attendance is shown that there are four types of secondary schools from 2000 to 2009. All we can look at is that the proportion of pupils attending institutions increased significantly in community schools during this period and a corresponding decrease in other schools.

Firstly, the Volunteer school of students in independent schools has fallen from just over half between 2000 and 2009 to just 20% or one-fifth. Similarly, the relative number of high school students fell by half (just under a quarter) over the same period in 2009. A relatively small proportion (12%) of students in this type of school is also in a non-significant decline in technical schools.
However, while the other three types of schools lost their importance in attendance, the opposite was true for community schools. In 2000, only 12% of students were taught in these schools, but actually, this number rose to more than half of all students in the next nine years.