"token’s value" should be "tokens' values"

Also, for a summary para, you never need to introduce it with "In summary" your organization spoke for itself.

#4 is one of the biggest issues but the reason you cited should not be the fear. It should be just token incentive economics in general. There will be situations where inflation are crucial to making the ecosystem healthy and valuable and where projects don't have enough to create the right incentives. Cryptoeconomics and token economics are basically unknown and unproven right now, but we'll learn more as more projects launch and fail. It's still so early!