Not bad at all, for a short piece you really developed the character well. Do you plan to use this ghost in other parts of the storyline?
If your others are as good as this one I would definitely look to Amazon to publish it and make a little more from them. It might even be good to use your steemit posts of the sections to fund the publishing costs.
Thank you so much! I’m not sure this ghost in particular will be back again, but you never know!
I’m hoping to make the other stories as good as if not better than this one. I do want to take my time with it and make it the best it can be! That’s a great idea to use the funds from posting on here to publish it!
That is a great thing about making the effort to develop even minor characters, you can always bring them back. Then you already have a base to work with.
I'm noticing the theme of using steemit to fund, and create for other platforms. It's like Youtube, now you have to have 1000 subscribers and a ton of views to monetize a video. So they have no way for a newbie to make money. So post the Youtube video to steemit, which gets you paid and creates views and subscribers on youtube. Then when you can monetize Youtube continue to do both....