New poem. @ayeshask | KIS TARHA JEE RAHI HU MAIN 11/04/2021
Hello steemians
So how are you guys hoping that everyone will be healthy and your family to.
I Was trying to complete it for the last 2 days now its complet I am sorry for did not write anything for the last 2 days, I was busy with this poem
My new poem
*** KIS TARAH JEE RAHI HU MAIN***
Teri yaado ke sahare jee rahi hu main,
Ye dard judai ka pee rahi hu main.
Tujhe kya pata kis tarah jee rahi hu main.
Tumhare bina jeena dushwar hai,
Or Tum kahte ho ki tumhe kisi or se pyar .
Jab chodna hi tha saath to dil lagaya Q,
Apna bana ke mujhe you tadpaya Q.
Jeena aata tha mujhe tujh se pahle
U zindagi me aake mujhe murda banayya Q.
Tu khus hai kisi or ki baaho me,
Main rooti hu tanha raaho me.
Ab or na aansu bahaogi main,
Bin tere bhi jeena sikh jaao gi main.
Tujhe kya pata kis tarah jee rahi hu main
Tere bina bhi jeena sikh rahi hu main
Tere bina bhi jeena sikh rahi hu main
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main itne mahnat se poem likhti hu par koi pasand nahi karta na support karta hai mujhe ye demotivat karta hai
I write Poem so diligently but no one likes or supports it demotivates me
****Suggest me the subject for next poem in comment*****
Thank you!
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Nice spoken , is this yours
bohot acha laga apki post parh kar , me bhi ek shayar hu or ye kahunga ki apne lafzo ka bohot achi tarah istemal kiya.
Sach me qalb tk baat pohoch gyi.
Nice poem,you are very talented. Keep going like this. Dont give up.
I really appreciate to your poem.
We will support you .don't give up
Thank you for sharing your poem with us.☺️
Thanks to all of you to support me
@alexcarlos ,. @kamranrkploy , @lavanyalakshman , @aman9675
Kisi ne bhi koi word diya nahi new poem ke liye ab poem ki word par banao