CREATIVE WRITING : TGA EPISODE 3( EVERYTHING TO GAIN)
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Today as I came back home I felt like I should drop this little poem and I hope you enjoy it and that it speaks in any little way it can unto you.
Thank you very much.
Briefly I will introduce "Everything to gain" as a very simple write up of communication between my heart and the script, with Regards to Yehoshua my lover.
The journey of the Christian faith tends to look hard because in the physical reality which is no main reality at all the desires tend to blind our judgement and make us choose the flesh.
Indeed the true choice should be the way of the Lord, there is everything to gain , in choosing the way of the Lord.
In Jesus I have everything to gain.
EVERYTHING TO GAIN
What many think of is pain,
Everytime it's Christ the lane,
no enjoyment ,no gain
no more outings and seeking fame
it's like in a cage ,one's been tamed.
What do I want to claim
some sort of saint? or what ? wait,
you sure in him we will have real gait
no no, I prefer my enjoyment not his aid.
I might believe he died and my price he paid
Then again this ecstasy , the highest I ll rate.
You said he'll bring more to the plate?
Truly truly I say into you
If I say this it's for your own good
as am sure there is no other route
Everything to gain in Yehoshua
Joy ,Love , happiness, take the list farther,
It's the same thing I told my father,
he laughed with my brother and sister.
Everything to gain , abundance of rain
no no no pain, come and see it's plane,
the toil and toil in vain, today gets the end
leave the trend and join this end.
Let him clothe with joy and not sadness
for your sorrow he changes to gladness
Rejoice , we have everything to gain
behold we have everything to gain.
~Bloomfield
Beautiful piece of peom here. This is so so inspiring. Great wordplay, and figures of speech. Oh my! Keep writing, I'm sure Yehoshua Hamashiach is smiling reading this right now 😋❤️
Brother this is so wonderful
I can testified with you that every day people are going to a lot because they need fame which end only in pain
Thank you for this creative writing ,I really appreciate you for that