The is a beautiful write-up and reading through it, I feel like there is a lot of industrial farming going on around you, in your community. Is the case of the local reality around you?
It's great to use free images from copyright-free websites but if lots of industrial farming is going on around you then you, why don't you use local pictures. Your creative writing was excellent but it read more like an academic presentation and I didn't really get a touch of the local reality at the grassroots or community level.