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RE: SLC-S21W1 - Habilidades para salvar vidas: guía de primeros auxilios y primeros auxilios básicos
Student Name: @yahnel
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [6.2/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Emphasized the importance of first aid knowledge and shared a personal experience with their daughter’s injury. This shows an understanding of real-life applications of first aid. | While the experience shared was relevant, more detail on the actions taken during the incident would enhance the response. For example, elaborating on the decision-making process and any specific first aid techniques that could have been applied would add depth. You could have explained the scene in a bit more detail about what the real injury was and whether there was any bleeding or not. What were the symptoms? Also, the question was about what you would have done if you had knowledge of first aid, which you didn’t provide. | [Grade: 0.7] |
| Question 2 | Identified the correct steps to take in an emergency situation and the importance of ensuring personal safety before acting. This demonstrates critical thinking and responsibility. | The response was not in order and lacking the fundamental concepts of the DRABC protocol. Also, you should explain each step in points and what actions have to be taken in each step. One should never call himself; rather, ask someone from the mob to do so. Also, you didn’t mention anything about clearing the airway passage or checking the breathing. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a DRABC protocol illustration in Spanish, which is a thoughtful inclusion for a local audience. The use of visual aids is commendable. | The illustration does not explain any of the steps of the DRABC protocol; rather, it just looks like a poster. The illustration should be comprehensive and detailed, having the full explanation of the DRABC protocol. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 4 | Provided a list of emergency contact numbers relevant to Venezuela, fulfilling the assignment requirements. This reflects awareness of local emergency services. | As the numbers on the paper were in a different language, I could not understand. You should have written them in a table so that they could be translatable, as I could not interpret any of them. Although there is freedom of language, it should be translatable. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | You have answered all the questions correctly. | Excellent work | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:.Great job on emphasizing the importance of first aid and sharing personal experiences! However, providing more detail in your responses, especially regarding specific actions taken and explanations of protocols, would enhance clarity. Overall, a commendable effort!
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Gracias por la evaluación, creo que la diferencia de idiomas sería un problema al momento de las evaluaciones, a y esos si son los números de emergencias principales en mi país , disculpe no se me ocurrió traducirlo para que usted lo entienda y cumplir con la tarea, éxitos en su curso bendiciones 💛💙❤️