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RE: Steem Women club Engagement Contest | Florece, crece y cree| By @vivimiranda
Thanks for taking a part on our latest contest, dear.
The writing is very good. Nice to read. But the second paragraph is too long, unfortunately. I suggest you to divide the paragraph into several paragraphs. For example, suppose you make each paragraph between 7-9 lines.
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