Steem_Ghana writing contest by @kharrysally.How hatred turned in to true love

in Steem Ghana3 years ago (edited)

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Once there lived a girl(Miriam) who lived in a cottage with her mom(Ama)She never had any contact with the world despite her mom and homeschool teacher since she was home schooled.Everything the girl needed was brought to the house so she didn’t even have a reason leaving the house.However her home school teacher always gave her stories about other kids and how the outside world really looks like.This brought the girls attention to explore the world .But she asked her mom why she can’t be like everyone and her mom told her she is still young and the story will be disclosed to her when she grows up.

Then one day after the homeschool teacher who was called Aunty left the house,Miriam followed her without her knowledge.She kept hiding in bushes so Aunty didn’t see her.Aunty got to the roadside and took a bus and left.Miriam also waited for the next bus and joined it without any known location in her mind.All she knew was she wanted to explore the world.Luckily she met this young lady who decided to take her home since it was getting dark.

Her mom (Ama) came back home to meet an empty apartment.She quickly called Aunty (home teacher) but she said she left her in the house as she always do.The mom started panicking and started shouting ‘they will find her and kill her’!

This was because in the world they lived before coming to earth,Miriam father was a bad person and caused everyone so much pain that they all wanted to kill him and all his relatives.They couldn’t because he exchanged his life for his dear wife and only child to come to earth where they can at least live a normal life without any fear.But when they got to earth they realize some of the people from the other world still chased them and the cottage was the only safe place for them.This was because at the cottage,such supernatural beings will not be able to view them or chase them.So when Miriam just left the cottage ,the leader of this supernatural being(Micky) felt her in his veins and all he was saying was I can feel her.

Miriam followed this young lady home and the next day the lady sent her to the same bus stop so she could board a bus home.When she got home her mom was surprised and angry at the same time but that wasn’t time for questions because she knew the people were coming for them.Ama quickly dragged her upstairs and kept her in a particular room.Before she could lock the room and come out the people were already in the house.The next question she could hear was where’s the girl and she said she isn’t home yet.Then their leader(Micky) asked again before she could say she didn’t see her he had slapped her so hard that she fell on her knees.That was when Miriam couldn’t keep hiding and just came out once!They took both of them and left.

The next day Miriam woke up in a room and couldn’t find her mother.Before she could get up to leave Micky entered through the door.She was now stranded.He came close to her and said ‘it’s not my fault you will go through this but your father’s fault’She started shaking not knowing what he was about doing to her.So he introduced himself as Micky.They were sent as a group to come for her and her mom,but before that he will take his revenge on her first.This was because her father raped Micky’s mom and stabbed his dad all before his eyes so he was doing the same thing to her.He moved closer to Miriam and when she tried moving back she realized she was stuck.He undressed her and raped her badly that blood was everywhere.She became very weak that she couldn’t wear her clothes neither could she clear the mess.

Micky owns a big high school on earth and was a very wealthy businessman.He ordered his maids to come clear the mess while they dress her up because he was sending her to school.When the maid came in she was really confused because their master is someone they know can never be seduced no matter how a lady was.So why did he decide to have sex with this little girl when she was even a virgin.But that wasn’t time for questions so he did as they ordered and left.Miriam was fully prepared and Micky took one of his cars and sent her to the school.As the owner of the school he just decided to put her in any class without questioning her.Every student in that class wanted to be her friend on the first day but she was very moody because of what happened to her.School was finally over and he came for her himself.But one thing that happened to Micky was that after that intercourse he didn’t feel like killing her again but he didn’t also know the reason because her dad has caused him the pain of his life.After school,he sent her to her room and made the maids to serve her food.When she was done eating then Micky came inside again for another sex.She wanted to complain but he gave her the chance to choose between death or be his sex doll till he doesn’t want anymore.He had another afternoon sex with her and this was less painful compared to the previous day.

This continued for months till Micky realizes he craves for the girl all the time.Not just sex but just want the girl to be around him to an extent of going on dates with her.He kept asking himself or maybe if he has fallen in live with the girl but he said no way!So one day when he was alone in his room ,his family from the other world visited him and told him it was time to return the next chief.That kept him thinking so deep that when he visited Miriam in her room,she realized things wasn’t right.After several questions he realized what was wrong.She asked him what was keeping him here still then he said someone was keeping his heart.She asked who and all she could feel was kisses all over saying it was her.

Then she set a condition that she will only follow him back to get married to him if he free the mother with much wealth that she won’t have to work again.He accepted that and the mom was freed and given all his properties he acquired on earth.They then went back to the other world ,got married and lived happily after.

I know the story was quite lengthy but the suspense kept you going to the end .
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 3 years ago 

I know the story was quite lengthy but the suspense kept you going to the end .

Lol shouldn't you await that feedback from your readers? haha, anyway it was fun reading though

Thanks for the support

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