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RE: club75 | Weekly Contest, "Creating Short Story Week #9". | Haydarpaşa Ferry by @wagner32

in WORLD OF XPILAR3 years ago

it was a nice story, a successful narration, the ending with a question.. congratulations..

But now I am writing a criticism, if there is an aching heart left, you did not love her very much, because if you loved and she left, she would have ripped out your heart and taken it with her..😅

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I like your perspective. Thank you for your critique. If I had you read the post before sharing it, I would definitely change the ending. :)

I noticed it when mine wasn't in place 😅

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