Suffering of Dreams| Short Story For Short Story Writing Contest by @growwithme

in Steem For Pakistan2 years ago

I wanted to become writer, in real life. So I did work hard for my purpose. On steemit, I also want to write, write and write. So I found a great contest for test my skill, by steemit culture community.

In free writing, and if we talk about writing a story, it is my favorite so I must let myself in the contest. I will try to follow all rules of contest, but possibly I will not get comments from my friends, because of very less time spending on steemit, I don't have friends on steemit.


I will get help from one picture, which photo can describe my story. Obviously I try to write on that similar photo.



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Sufferings of Dreams

The sun was shining and helping to increase water's shining with its energy. I was happy here , I saw the moon, it was behind the clouds, everything was mind-blowing here.

My name is Rizwan , and people know me as a guardian of forest. The people says that I am very rude. But I don't care what people says. Last year Asma (my ex wife) left me, because she was disappointed from my work. I don't know why, it's difficult to understand a woman. Nowadays I am with a modern family, they wanted to watch the beauty of my country, and they chosen me as guardian. So I am on my job. Their daughter is taking interest in me. We often stay in hotels, where we go.
One night we had a plan for staying near forest, on the request of a boy from family. He wanted to feel the adventure of camping. The night was too long, and the family was not sleeping, they asked me to tell them a story from my life.
The story which I was sharing with them,
I was enjoying that beautiful day of my life. That sunset and it's shining, I never forget. I was enjoying this, with a cigar, eating some roasted chicken. Suddenly I saw round shape three things, those was coming from the sky. In one second I thought that it is star. But when the first thing landed in water very near to me. I was shocked, because it was not a piece of the star but it was beautiful in color.
"So what was that?"
Asked the girl (who was with family)
"I was a guide, not a brave soldier, I started running faster, and never turned back, untill I reached my car" I replied to her.

Then I said them Goodnight, go sleep and let me sleep. But they forced me again for a story, and I started:

"We were in the place, which was look like a forest but it was a graveyard. Those trees were sign of the people who lived there. They was very tall, and as well as very powerful."

The girl started freely flirting with me. She sat with me, in front of her family. Moreover, her father did ask me to marry her. I was just surprised.

The sky was dark blue. We was watching the beautiful sky. We was enjoying biscuits, and tea.
This was my 3rd tour of this forest. The boy was sleeping.

"I camped in forests of "Bara Gali" with couple of friends for a week. The trip was great for me and for my friends too. When it was getting dark, we did set up our camp in forest, few miles away from a town.
The only existing was, in the town were one road and a post office. In middle of the night we heard screaming from the distance. We was not discerning those voices, but they were far far away. I did open my tent and looked over at my friends, they were looking to me. We was keep quiet. That was the scariest night of my life."

Next day we met with a man who belongs to that town and we told him, what we listened. He told us the story of forest.
"It is not just a forest, but it is an old graveyard. The people who lived there, they was very tall. They did spent a sinful life. We beleive, after getting punishment for their sins, they screems at night. Go to your home and don't come back."

Now I am with you. The story ended.
After some time, the family went back to their home. We will marrying next month. The family spends very much time with me. I am happy that I am getting a family.
When I woke up I was on my room's floor, I was suffering from a dream.

I hope you like my story, and as rule of contest I want to invite @steemdoctor1, @malikusman1 and @faran-nabeel. I hope I will get their support and a feedback on my post.


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 2 years ago 

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 2 years ago 

Thanks you very much sc04. Jazakallah @suboohi, thankful for kind support.

 2 years ago 

Very nice entry wish you best of luck for this contest.

 2 years ago (edited)

Thank you brother for your support. It's valuable to me.

 2 years ago 

Thanks for your participation. Best of luck for the contest

 2 years ago 

I am thankful to community for providing this great chance for members.
I need your help, my Achievement 5 Task 2 post is not getting reviewed by any greeter? I hope you help me.

 2 years ago 

Hi, @growwithme

Thank you so much for sharing your post at #steemit-culture community. We are extremely happy to see your post.

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Recommend : Please try to make more unique post and used your original content with out use of paraphrase words... Best of luck dear for this contest.

 2 years ago 

I will try my best, Thank you for review.

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