"Pick a Word, Paint a Story #04"

in Hindwhale Community15 hours ago

"With my last breath, I want to tell you that I have always loved you. I would rather be a ghost wandering with you as a condemned soul than enter heaven without you. Because of your love, I will never be a lonely soul."

-Crouching Tiger, Hidden Tiger

Hello my steemian friends,

This is my participation in the contest” “PICK A WORD, PAINT A STORY #04" By @senehasa in Hindwhale Community

LOVE

Love is a set of human feelings and emotions that a person has towards another person. Love can be seen as a strong attachment towards another person.

Love is such a tender feeling that we have for our beloved parents, siblings, friends, girlfriends as well as our favorite object or pet. Actually, it is a special feeling given to man by God.

The world is running because of this feeling of love. If it is not there, life becomes completely dull and lifeless.

We have heard and read many stories of lovers in the world, including Romeo Juliet, Shirin Farhad, Laila Majnu, Sohni Mahiwal, Shahjahan Mumtaz Mahal and many more which are recorded in the pages of history.

But there are many such people in love whose names are not recorded in any story or history and their stories are buried in the depths of the past.

It is said that lovers do not look at age, caste, economic status, looks, complexion, dark or fair complexion, when they fall in love with someone, they do not even listen to the advice of family members, society or friends.

Love is such a magic that dominates a person's mind. It is such a pleasant feeling that even the imagination of which fills a person with happiness.

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I fell in love [one sidedly] at a very young age when I was probably just 14 years old. In my neighbourhood, there was a family of a family friend whose daughter was of my age. She was very beautiful and carefree at that age.

Because I was very interested in Mathematics, I used to get very good marks and even children of my age in my neighbourhood used to come to me to understand Maths questions. This beautiful girl also used to come to me to understand Maths questions.

Due to her carefree nature, she used to laugh and smile at every little thing. Because of these things of hers, I had the misconception that maybe she was attracted towards me. And this misunderstanding made me fall in love with her.

But because of my father's strict nature and in those days, there was no freedom to express these things, I could never express my love for that girl. And after a few years, she got married and I also got married to someone else.

But for many years I used to remember her smiling, beautiful face and her words. This was a case of one sided love, maybe I would never have been able to tell her this, but coincidentally I met her at a wedding ceremony after about 10 years of her marriage with her husband, I saw that she had become even more beautiful and charming.

She also saw me and immediately came to me and after asking me about my well being, she said to me "You coward, if you had expressed your love, then today we both would have come here in this ceremony as husband and wife".

My eyes were wide open with surprise, I felt good even after so many years to hear that she too had realized my love. But due to social constraints, our age at that time, and our family relations, neither I nor she could say it.

But I was happy that she too liked me, and maybe she loved me in her heart.

Now these things did not matter because that girl and I were very happy in our lives with our life partners.

I also want to invite here
@mehwish-almas @tammanna and @zisha-hafiz

Thanks for reading my post, I pray to God for the progress and happy future of all Steemians.

With Great love and honour,

Sur-riti❤️

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Sir, a very touching and beautiful story you represent in front of us. You have elaborated on the purity and innocence of young love. How realistically you shared the small emotional feelings like her laughter and smile. Your beautiful story explains the experience of some points of one-sided love like – the feeling, and words left unspoken and these feelings leave lasting memories into our minds. At the end the twist where she revealed her feelings is so touching. Yes, it is the hard reality of life that fate and circumstances keep people apart but no matter what the love and respect for those memories remain green. I got a lifetime lesson that ho you appreciate the past without letting not be affected by your present happiness in life. Thank for inviting me and allow me to read this beautiful story. May Almighty bless you always.

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 4 hours ago (edited)

Hello my friend,

I really liked your writing style and selection of words. The comment you made on my post made me very emotional. It is true that when we are at that age, our emotions are very high. Later, a person can control his emotions under the burden of responsibilities. That was one such love story in which I controlled my emotions at that age, otherwise in today's time, boys and girls do not listen to their career or anyone's advice.

Thank you and best wishes. Once again, I am grateful from the heart for your beautiful and emotional comment.

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 6 hours ago 

Thanks sir.

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