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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @abijacob
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [6.8/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a personal experience of managing an unexpected medical emergency, effectively conveying the confusion and quick actions taken, such as providing water and seeking help. | Good response to the scenario; however, the response could be more detailed. Consider discussing how you identified the immediate priority (hydration and comfort) and elaborate on the decision-making process. Reflecting on what specific first aid knowledge would have been beneficial to know could also add depth to your response. Additionally, work on sentence clarity and structure for a smoother narrative. The real question, however, asked what you would have done or what could have been different if you were a first responder at the scene. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 2 | Appropriately outlined the DRABC protocol, emphasizing initial safety checks, assessing responsiveness, and explaining basic steps for airway and circulation management. | While the steps of DRABC were described, more detailed explanations are needed for clarity, especially regarding airway management, such as removing any visible obstructions manually and managing bystanders effectively. Ensure to cover the DRABC steps in a logical order, adding specific details for each part of the protocol (e.g., "check for breathing by observing the chest rise and fall" and "apply clean cloth for bleeding"). Also, it’s preferable to ask a bystander to call emergency services instead of calling them yourself. | [Grade: 0.8] |
| Question 3 | Listed emergency contact numbers and provided a photo for reference, which shows attention to detail. | Good effort here; however, I noticed some numbers were repeated. Kindly avoid repetition. Consider including a description and details about each facility to improve the clarity of the information provided. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 4 | Created an illustration of the DRABC protocol using Canva, demonstrating effort and creativity. | Although the illustration was well done and presented with a creative style, the image quality is low. Consider enhancing image quality and adding more specific details for each DRABC step within the illustration to improve clarity. Ensure the layout is visually engaging and includes labels or symbols to represent each step, making it easier for viewers to understand at a glance. | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz, demonstrating a basic understanding of the first aid material covered in the lesson. | Scored 10 out of 10 in the quiz. Great job! | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Overall, a solid effort with good foundational understanding of first aid principles. With added attention to detail and presentation clarity, your future responses can become even stronger. Remember to follow the prompt closely and enhance clarity in visual aids. Great job on the quiz!
Thank you for your participation and effort!
Regards,
@abdu.navi03