Maybe I will like you to know more About where you can publish your post. The newcomer community is for introduction for new users. After the introduction post you're to post in any community you like. I can see that you have a good writing skills but you just need to use it in a right community. If you would like to chat or ask questions about the platform and how to navigate I will recommend you joining us in telegram.

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