Hello friend...

Thank you for trying to write your introduction well, I see that some of the information needed has not been written properly
writing the title is not correct, verification photo is not available, writing tags is not correct you also need to tell us other active social media links for the account validation process

please read Achievement 1: Verification Through Introduction

for example https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@philipa/achievement-1-introduction-to-newcomers-community-or-09-04-2023-or-philipa

Good luck