The Gryphon

iamraincrystal (68)in The Ink Well • 5 years ago (edited)

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5 years ago in The Ink Well by iamraincrystal (68)

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stormlight24 (66)mod 5 years ago

'' I've buried a number of people during this war, people who actually meant something to me, friends, comrades, family. '' To me this highlights story of yours and it seems to me that it tells a lot about complexity and the story that follows his character. I'm glad you found inspiration in my beginning. Thanks for sharing. :)

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iamraincrystal (68) 5 years ago

Thank you 🙂🙂

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theinkwell (55) 5 years ago (edited)

Interesting direction you took with this one @iamraincrystal

I like how you show Erin has essentially abandoned his roots of where he came from, become a hardened warrior with less emotional connection. That would be every soldiers path I guess.

One of the final passages gives this impression clearly...

Stabbing the earth with the old shovel I held, I noticed how old man Remus slightly flinched away from me. "Erin.. This isn't you.." he softly said in the silence of the night as he wobbled on his cane.

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carolkean (66)mod 5 years ago

Exactly the lines that caught my attention!

"Erin.. This isn't you.." he softly said in the silence of the night as he wobbled on his cane.
"It's what I have become."

Powerful!

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iamraincrystal (68) 5 years ago

Thank you :)

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iamraincrystal (68) 5 years ago

Thank you so much! ^_^ It's an honor to contribute to @theinkwell community :)

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