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RE: SLC21/WK5 || Choking and Airway Obstruction | A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @neelofar
Overall grade: 7.4
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. | There are a few shortcomings in this question as you didn't mention what the 'clutching throat' acrion is termed. Some people are allergic to certain edibles which may cause sudden partial or complete obstruction whereas some people might have something stuck in their airway passage. Other than this very well done. | [Grade: 2] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing a Heimlich maneuver. | The student has a few shortcomings in this question. Important action of holding the fist with other hand is missing. The number of thrusts are also missing in this question. A pictorial demonstration of the Heimlich Maneuver is also not included by the student. | [Grade: 1] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. Good explanation | The number of thrusts in the Heimlich Maneuver are missing. You mentioned CPR. How many compressions? You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction. | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this. I enjoyed reading this post but there were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1