THE DIARY GAME SEASON 3 (04/11/2020) || OFFICE THINGS : ON MY DUTY POST
Dear diary
I starteed my day with prayer after morning devotion,i started preparing for my office work, i engaged myself with the house chores, i swept everyhere,wash the dishes and make a breakfast for myself and when i was done with that i dashed into the bathroom and took my bath and dressed up for my diary work
@soloben
in my office will started with prayer and preparing for i said work
@soloben
I look things how people take life,this make be happy on happen because in my work i see people who poor and rich in life,financial literacy,this is one of the laws or principles that are not taught in financial matters and be wealthy you have to understand the languages and codifications of money.when you have this level of expertise,money becomes your servant, and not your master.money serves people,instituions, communities and governments.money on its own does not have any intrinsic value,it only has the value that we input into it,for instance Anyone who only wants to receive without giving will,,Rich in life make you who are or who are,
@soloben
This my are work,
A way of life make you good in any way,my packaged for fulfillment of destiny.
Hello @soloben
Thank you for sharing your diary and your thoughts with us.
Permit me to suggest some corrections on this your diary entry.
First, your entry had more of your thoughts on life matters then how your day went.
This was all you told us about your day. The rest were your personal take on life. Your diary entry should be how you spent your day, as detailed as possible. Your personal thoughts are fine but they shouldn't be more than how you spent your day. Try the ratio 85% (how your day went) - 15% (personal thoughts).
Secondly, it will be nice if you justified your text and neatly arrange them in paragraphs according to points (hope you get what I'm saying here)
Also, you need to use the #betterlife tag in all your diary entries as part of your first five tags. That's the rule.
Lastly, your images are without caption. We don't know what they are about. Adding captions to your images makes them more understandable.
I hope you understand that the purpose of my corrections is to help you write a better diary. This will all but guarantee you more upvotes.
Thank you for your understanding.
Blessings and peace.
#twopercent #nigeria #diarydoctor #affable
Thanks noted will take corrections