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RE: MY HOME MY PRIDE//@ESTHY

in SteemAlive3 years ago

You are welcome @esthy for your write up in which you advised married women on how to live their lives with their husband. But you didn't indicate if you are married or not. I expected you do that this in your Introduction.

Additionally, you tried a lot in your use of scripture references. But you should have limits it to few. Why? The too many scriptures can make your reader not to read any of those.

Apart the above remarks, I thank you once again for your write up.
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Thanks so much sir, @johanjahb

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