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RE: Not Really Reading

in Freewriters4 days ago

I'm confused by the next part

“Then, the Deer came and gave the Lion King advice on how to deal with problems without sleeping... So, the Lion King finally wakes up, but gets confused himself!” Roger continued with his improvised story.

When did the king fall asleep or did he dream the deer advice him? I expected a different tezt after reading the title and the picture misleads but I'm glad I read your funny child logic story.

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 3 days ago 

There are no important aspects to this story, it flows without direction and there are no lessons to be learned.

So, if you're really confused, I've succeeded. That's the purpose of this story, to keep everyone confused, but entertained.

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 2 days ago 

Really or did you just made this up because you forgot to write something since it doesn't read that way or is it the translator?

 2 days ago 

It's a story from a middle schooler, so it's only natural that there are a few parts that he (maybe) missed.

 2 days ago 

That me misses a few parts isn't the problem it's more that there's a weird text, perhaps the translator.

Not important always good LOL

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