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RE: THE TATOO THAT APPEARS WHEN YOU TELL YOUR FIRST LIE

in Freewriters28 days ago

That tattoo sounds interesting. I wonder what it looks like if lie after lie is told, or will only an overwhelming smell be present?
A beautiful flower does grow on smelly soil filled with corpses and the pastries you describe, if they are filled with meat it's from a dead body, something like in Sweeney Todd.

Is it ugliness if there is a sense of truth? I wonder what happened with Pinocchio's nose.

I love your poem! It's awesome.

A great, creative weekend, with or without a lie that inspires you.

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 24 days ago 

The ugly smell keeps growing, and might get noticeable. The beautiful also grows but slower than it ugliness.

If there's a sense of truth, the flower grows from a great source but if it's surrounded by lies, it's just as good as rotten
I'm glad you liked it🥰

 24 days ago 

I like the word choice and your comment a lot. It sounds as if what's born out of what's rotten remains rotten no matter how great the smell was (for a very short time).

 24 days ago 

That's an interesting way to put it, I agree, it highlights the lasting impact.

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