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RE: Darkly humorous tale of Lady koi koi: The Red-Heeled Terror That Never Left
Great story! Did you write more? Is this your niche?
I can't blame the lady for taking revenge and if you ask me you are scaring those children at school with this story of yours. Still working at the schoolyard?
If this is your entry, what is the grade you will give yourself and why?
Have a quick look at Lesson 1.
Well… i will score myself ”8/10” because the story isn’t entirely mine. Is a popular ghost story that was used to scare us when we were much younger in the hostel.
Hahaha… many of this gen z and alpha kids don’t know about this story. They are too Porsche and occupied a lot with gadgets to have time for stories.
The days of story telling ended with my generation.
My best comment for now is @almaguer. He brought a different perspective that would have enriched my story more.
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If you tell the tale, you make it yours. Very good writing. Congrats.
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