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RE: Salma, The Humiliated Woman....

in Freewriters3 days ago (edited)

I felt so calm for a very long time reading your story, I was really entertained the right way and I think you deserve a handshake from the president of your country for creating such a nice story 😊.

I dislike young men like Steven because they do unnecessary things to girls that can even lead to their unexpected death. Why can't Steven control himself? His careless mistake has made him killed Salma and now her life has ended just like that, poor old grandma who will never forget this.

Everyone was shocked, except the village leader.

Please can give tell us the reason why the village leader wasn't shocked at that particular moment?

Is good Steven was arrested but was arresting the poor dogs necessary? 😂 I laughed out loud when I read that part, your story is super and I will love to read more stories from you my friend.

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Thank you for such valuable input,

Please can give tell us the reason why the village leader wasn't shocked at that particular moment?

The village leader is Steven's father, and as parents we must know the temperament of children from childhood to adulthood....
Steven's father was shocked beyond shock... Wow!
How is a child who fails?
This is where the theory is my friend....
Evil will find its place and vice versa,
Dogs are only trained to destroy, so what happens if left alone.... 😁

Yes you are right and I must say that you really have alot of skills in writing.

As for the dogs, am very sure they won't be in the police custody for long, someone else might buy them and train them to act right. I just participated and I will love you to read my story.

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