Pithole Bridge Pitfall

in Freewriters13 days ago
Describe what you see

I see two pigs, one already in the mud and another falling into the mud; I see the pig in the mud looking at the other one coming in; I see the pig coming in squealing, and I see a splash on top of the other pig.

Describe what you feel

My feeling is dependent on everything I see in this picture. I assume these two pigs are siblings, and I feel they are in mud that will not drown them because the first pig is partially submerged; he fell into this mud first, which is why you can see the splash over the head region, and I believe the time frame this two fell into the mud is short. I feel the first pig squeal first, just like the one coming in because getting in here was never intentional but accidental, and on seeing another one, though he has a companion, yet was surprised. I don't think the incoming from the free fall is aware that another pig is in here, seeing his eyes are up.

I assigned the pronoun "he" to both pigs.

The story behind the image


Pigger and Bigger are siblings, and their mom has always instructed them not to go near the pithole bridge, especially when she is not around or their swineherd (Farmer Bello), as it has always been very hard to come out, and if the mud sent there by some human fills the pit, they may likely drown without anyone's knowledge. She told them a story of one of their neighbour's sons (a piglet) who drowned in there when the pit was filled with mud and water.

All because after that pit hole was a massive swimming pole, which they both love to swim. Pigger and Bigger made plans to go there, but none of them exposed their intentions. Bigger looked around the house and didn't see bigger; he was just 2 minutes older than him. He thought he was sleeping, so he sneaked out of the pigsties, intending to have fun across the bridge, still in the free range plot. When he reached the bridge, he hopped with so much excitement, knowing he was close to his place of fun and excitement. The slap slipped him over; with his weight and floppy body he could withstand, while on air, multiple thoughts came into Bigger's mind.

I pray this is a dream. I know I am falling into this pithole. Yes, I am, gruuuuuun!!!!!!!

What if this pit is full?

Who will be there to rescue me?

I am dead, he began to squeal.

Not knowing that Bigger was already here, bigger was surprised to see his brother in the air; he got a companion, not in this mischief alone; they would all squeal together till their voices are heard by the swineherd. Fortunately, the pit is not full.

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