Love under the moon
Well this mystery is that our duke could only go out at night, since he was a vampire and the duchess was a werewolf, since on full moon nights she was a very fierce werewolf, but her great beloved vampire always took care of her, since it was a forbidden love for two very different races, but love can do anything.
So this love lasted for centuries, even though the two races did not agree, but they made peace for many years, where the great elders of the two races came to a truce, the most shocking thing was this marriage had a son named Anthony, who had both vampire and werewolf blood, they decided to go away from humans who were not prepared for this type of life, they built a castle and a wall on a hill that only very few knew of its existence, to take care of their son and their love under the night, there is only one legacy about the famous marriage, two paintings, one of the count and the French duke in a gallery in Germany, but he was never seen and no one knew his son Anthony.
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Hello @newton666,
you had a good story concept there. Next time, why don't you try to develop the images of different episodes in the story into individual paragraphs, instead of condensing the full story in one very long sentence? I bet you could do this and would get a lot more readers.
Have a great day,
Pedro
Here's a great suggestion from @hefestus for you @newton666, go for it!
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User dos detector to buy my content
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Saludos buenas dia eso lo escribi yo, no tengo necesidad de usar esa herramienta.
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Hola. Desculpad por la suspecha. No me havia enterado que hablas español. Talvez tengas utilizado un traductor. Eso lo explica. Un abrazo.
Una cosa más... El que te he dicho antes, sobre dividir los episódios de la historia en diferentes paragrafos, en vez de hacerlo en una frase muy longa, continuo a sugerirlo. Verás que, para ele lector se torna más agradable leer tu historia y encontrarás más personas interesadas en leer tus escritos, sobretodo se desarrollas eses paragrafos en una historia con un poquito más detalle.
Fuerte abrazo y perdón por haver suspechado de ti.
Claro con gusto lo tomaré en cuenta
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Of course that's how it is
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I would also like to thank you for taking the time to check a post, in my experience we need to use more than just one detection tool to make sure a text is AI or not, unless you have a tool you really trust, I personally use GPTZero to check, and it has been used by moderators and curators I know. But is it accurate? Yes and no, but at least we have a strong argument.
I find that great arguments will come out of us telling people that we doubt the authenticity of their texts because it will cause them to react, as no one will want to admit to using an AI tool. Interestingly, people that never answer your questions about their work, suddenly erupt, as soon as you lay the suspicion that they are here just to graft the curator system. I will change the way I do this, as I will start complaining directly to a curator instead of wasting time with arguments that will end up being "he said, she said".
Please, delete your comments or just replace it with different text. Let's not start a witch hunt here. Most freewriters I know and they are old Steemians and it's wiser to talk and ask before show this. You can also check someone's account for nationality so you can see which language is spoken.
Thanks.
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It stopped, already.