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RE: Sweet Mary / La dulce Mery

in Freewriters4 days ago

Rosa Francia is an unlucky person.
Too bad she ended everything with anger. Cruelty will not come if we see and face it with a clear mind. Actually, a person's emotions really need to be managed. Moreover, this is a matter of love. A broken friendship. "What does it all mean?".
Do you know that friendship is more valuable than a man, and a good man will not have a bad influence.
Jealousy? This is one of the criminal traits that exist in a person, "planted and cultivated".
We should protect ourselves from negative things, if not us then who else will protect us,
This crime story leaves many mysteries, two years ....

Nice to read your story friend, may you always be successful dear ... 🤗😘

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Ciertamente, esta historia merece seguirse contando. ¿Sabes? Cuando hice la primera versión del relato escribí 1.620 palabras; en verdad resulta difícil crear un texto policial con 550, ya que el escritor se ve "obligado" a dejar muchos "cabos sueltos" como en este caso. Por eso tu comentario es pertinente y certero. De hecho, esas interrogantes que expones en este comentario podrían ser de gran utilidad para seguir desarrollando el texto. Gracias por pasar y comentar.

 2 days ago 

you forgot the hashtag #wewrite underneath your comments!

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