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RE: Say Something - A Short Story

in Freewriters5 years ago

Hahaha.. that would have been fun. Her being a supernatural entity.
I thought of that but wanted to stay grounded.

The language she spoke was Bangala. Language of West Bengal India.

The narrator argues a lot with themselves. I think I project myself on my characters. Maybe that's why they spend more time arguing with themselves. Hahaha.

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Too much projection makes it Mary Sue (or Gary Stu if you prefer). About this much or a bit less makes it believable and relatable ;D

Hahaha, being perfect itself is a flaw.

I had to google Mary.
And I get it why many would hate her but I kinda like that character. She is OPed without having any power.

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