RE: A Note- An Out-Of- The-Box Script (Test 2)
I take one and try to make it more visible imagination:
The car, a burgundy red Maserati GranTurismo GT is parked in front of a slaughterhouse. The afternoon (or) sun is shining and scorching, and the street is deserted. The sound from the slaughterhouse is clearly audible as if there were no walls. The wind is blowing dust on the street and a piece of dirty paper is stuck under the windshield wiper of the only car on the street. The heavy cloud hanging in the sky looks like it is going to rain.
What I understand about the script is only a little; describes things visible and must be clear to be imagined in detail.
I am really not a scriptwriter, not at all....I don't know where to start. I once was asked by a movie maker friend to help him out, but I could not do anything about it.
The good news is only @grebmot did so far no one else. We all struggle around and if I see a script it's a hard, frequently boring read but I think it's good to learn how to describe something. I am not good at that. So far I wrote three. It's getting easier but I believe number 2 I s the most readable with a little bit of script instructions left.
Start
3 action
4 dialogue
I believe these are the 4 used most and you can mix them. So after today I think the best thing is to just write a story and next search for those different parts.