Yes, sometimes I can feel it. Very nice poem. I especially like the walkers circling back, as birds often do, and the end of the stanza with the crows. For me, you created a single image of birds out of disparate elements, a oneness that is the something happening and touches your theme of togetherness. Damn. Well done.
I know that you know freewrites carry messages the writer themselves don't know they've put in there. With freewrite poetry, this is amplified. You've found
for me. It is always a pleasure to have you in my space. Thank you for coming.
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