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RE: Just a little bit of blue R2.08
It is an interesting proposal. You use literary resources very well. It is a very visual novel, you sculpt the characters directly on the stone. Which gives it that dimension of freshness and closeness. I remain a spectator to this universal theater that you are deploying. I feel that there are many characters, which will be difficult to resolve. That only points to the fact that it will be a story with more than one saga. To be able to give life and prominence to each one. Success, keep writing.
As with all good stories, all characters are related and all the action will converge to a single climactic point in space and time. I already know where that is. Obviously, some spin-offs are possible, however, this story will soon turn into a race against time that will precipitate every one of these characters fates.