I like this kind of stories. I would like to see this kind of stories. Urban legends or whatever. But told from another point of view. Stories where the narrator (is the writer) and tells us about experiences and introduces ideas and comments, take me out of the plot. Victor Hugo did that a lot in his novels. Other writers who wrote for hire did it. It's not that it's wrong. It's just that nowadays and my personal taste. It prevents me from enjoying these stories much more.
It has a lot of juice this type of narration. Narrated from a personal point of view. By one of those involved in the disappearance. Handling the stories from the psychology of the disappeared. In short a million stories to tell.
I would like to read many more of the stories you write. Best regards and don't stop writing.
almaguer 10.36 pm