Sorry, this is personal, but this is not so creative. Not this time in human history when suicides are at an all time peak. If you're having a dark moment, please see a therapist. You can't be making this kind of posts on public spaces. You're inciting depressed people who may stumble over this to suicide. Those who may not be depressed yet to the point of suicidal thoughts but who may read this now may very well embrace the sentiments of this post when their dark moments visit.
I believe our artistic creations should inspire and up-build, not the opposite. Else it's not worth it at all. Please consider taking this off the blog, for the sake of others.
And please if you're struggling with any deep concerns, talk with a therapist. You can chat me up privately and we talk more on this, please.
Thank you for reading my post, and I'm sorry you don't like it. I'm not going to remove the post, becuz in my opinion it is not at all about suicide. In mythology, love is ignited when a person is struck by Cupid's arrow. The bullet in this poem is a contemporary update on this image.
You are free to your own interpretation, but please don't misunderstand. The magic of creativity is freedom. You have a big heart and a lot of empathy, and that is good. But please understand...
This is a love poem.