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RE: I wanted to become a programmer
| Description | Result |
|---|---|
| Text Quality/Easy Read | ☑ |
| Human write/AI Free | ☑ |
| Plagiarism Free | ☑ |
| Proger☑/☐ | ☐ |
| Grade | 3/10 |
You only implicitly mention and write in general terms that programmers create websites, applications, software, tools.
Again, you only superficially describe that programmers eliminate errors and redesign products.
The text contains a lot of unnecessary details that do not relate to the questions asked, the questions are almost all ignored. Many repetitions, thoughts jump chaotically.
Maybe in the next lesson, which will be more practical, you will do better. And the main question, which no one has solved, will be transferred to the next lesson as an additional one. And you did not even mention this question.
There are not any kind of questions in your post, nor it is described well what we have to do. What are tasks, that's all mixed up post you published what we can do then. No proper questions you asked, nor proper English translation version you created. Really sorry for straight forward answer.
And now you are also not even encouraging the user, just giving your review and going away.
There is a text in two languages, with an English translation. Why are there no questions? I had to read the whole text. There is homework. There is even a short version of it, where there are 4 questions. And everyone else answered them, even though they all answered questions#4 incorrectly, but they gave an answer, and you didn't give any at all.
It's just now looking in manners, and I am damn sure by the way I too answered all of them in my post, I accept I added some additional information but it was related to my story, so it was necessary to add. I am sorry but I don't think this type of management is better to hold SEC.
The fact that you added additional information does not affect anything badly. This lesson can be called introductory, zero. It was possible not to do it, but to start with the second one. I said that the next lessons will be more practical, more specific and clear questions. Don't worry.