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RE: Beauty that lies around || “10% beneficiary to @beautycreativity”
Very nice my friend. Well done!! 👏
The only thing is that you must break up your paragraphs more. This will allow for easier reading.
Thank you dear @patjewell. It really is better as a reader if it is broken into smaller sections. I am going to edit this post, and I will try to remember this in future. You explain about writing in such an easy manner with example, that I did not get from my teachers. Take love 💚
Oh wow! What a difference to your post.
Not only does it read easier but it also looks so much neater.
Well done! 🎕
It totally does! I am also amazed by the difference as I read it after the edit. Thank you so much!
The pleasure is all mine!