Hi friend.
It's good that you tell us about your taste in music and it's nice to know that you share a song in common with your sister because it makes her always present.

I know that you are new to the platform and that is why I ask you to take into account all the recommendations that you are given, for example.

I recommend that you justify the post so that the paragraphs are well organized.
Try not to use such long paragraphs because you would lose the sense of what you want to convey, you can make a paragraph of seven to nine lines.

Good luck in the challenge 🤞🏻
Many Blessings..🙏🏻