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RE: GRASSROTS EDUCATION Vol.2 Homework; 10% to steemkidss

in Steem Kids & Parents • 2 years ago
Dear @sheban. Thanks for participating in the Grassroot crypto education Vol.2. See the ratings and feedback of your entry below.

Grading Basis Score
Question 1 1.75/2
Question 2 1.5/2
General Understanding of the Context 1.75/2
Quality of Analysis/Structure 1.5/2
Originality 1/1
#club5050 1/1
Total 8.5/10

Feedback/Suggestions

  • Great work. You should aim at doing more of proper analysis of your response to improve your general performance.
    • This was the first in the world and it was invented by a man or people who are anonymous but better known as Satoshi Nakamoto
  • First what? The word cryptocurrency is missing in the sentence and it becomes hard for someone who has no knowledge of the context to understand what you are driving at. Take note.
    • The advantages of having low votality include;
  • It is volatility. You still need to proofread your article one more time to correct some typo errors. Kindly take note.
    • For example in the illustration given by teacher @fredquantum, we see that Janes coin will be stable even as Joe's losses value.
  • In the illustration given in class, Joe's asset actually increased in value. You could have said, if the asset drops overtime, Joe's investment would be at loss while Jane's would be stable.
  • Do not forget that I recommended that you should try as much as possible to justify your article in the last lesson.
  • Overall, nice try. Pay attention to the corrections.

    • Total| 8.5/10

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      Thank you sir. I will try harder next time

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