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RE: Tell Us About Your Best Christmas Memory||Organized By @ederra
Hello @rhema01,
Honestly speaking, your story is a very amazing one. I, specifically love exploring new places to learn more about Nigeria and it's culture, am glad you finally visited your mom's birth place.
Corrections
I love your flow of language, but you should learn how to use punctuation marks.
We left Ohafia for Abuja on the 30th of November 2019😭
The above statement contradicts your story, it's supposed to be december not November.
Generally, you have a very nice work, just endeavor to always re-read your content to make necessary corrections before posting.
Yes true
Saw the mistake tried to edit but am new so my power up couldn't take it yesterday
But I have made the corrections
Thank you for your review
Still hope this doesn't affect my chance to win the contest
Let's keep watching