Contest- First Contest By SteemFiction For Creative Writers

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Story written by @dove11
We were in The Alps to witness the Fresh Falling Snowfall and we were watching it … Bright - Oh bright, coming from the sky like fresh falling stars on the white ground.

Yes!!! We are heading up to see the Spectacular view of falling snow!!!

We were all sound asleep when we heard Dev shout, "Wake up everyone!!!! Come see this!!!"

We all woke up from our rest and came out of the van!

Dev, our guide was right when he said that our best chance to see falling snow was. Snow was still falling in the Swiss Alps in March. We felt it's freezing cold in Zozovat Town.

"Wowwww!!!!" Here we go!!!

I was still rubbing my eyes, amused awestruck and not believing what I was seeing.

Dev shouted again- Hey guys the dream of our trip is in front of you all ... you can see the falling snow in the Alps which we were least expecting in first week of March and are below average for this time of year – especially at lower altitudes.

We took our skiing gear from the van and ...

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We, a group of 7 people along with our guide Dev, had traveled from Zurich city for about 250 kms on the Alps mountain range in our special van.

We all were very fond of skiing in the snow. We had reached here a day earlier but unfortunately it was not snowing that day.

Whereas our plan was that whenever it starts snowing, we will take out our gear and start skiing.

That's why our wait was over and all of us who were lying lazily in our van were filled with happiness on hearing the spirited voice of our guide Dev.

When we saw the view outside, my heart swelled with happiness. It was snowing very well on the mountain outside, suddenly the atmosphere became colourful.

In no time, that field of the Alps mountain was filled with snow, and other skiing enthusiasts like us had reached the ground with their groups.

All the members of our group also started enjoying the skiing very much, the weather suddenly turned very cold.

Suddenly, somewhere far away, a fierce roar of clouds was heard, and the sky was covered with clouds, the sky was also darkened by the coming of clouds, but everyone was shattered in their fun, and were enjoying skiing at a very high speed.

Selina, a girl from the group with me, was racing with her boyfriend Bobby, both of them had disappeared from our sight, in fact they both had gone far ahead.

Only then did they see a snowstorm rising from the mountain in front of them. Both of them started walking at high speed to get back from there after saving their lives, but the speed of the storm was much faster than them and they were about to get caught in it that they saw the mouth of a cave there, and both of them Entered into it.
Hearing the forecast of a fierce snow storm and its sound, Dev had instructed all of us to come back as well, and we all reached our van and started waiting for Celina and Bobby. But he didn't reach there even till night, so we all decided to find them with sad heart the next day when the weather is right.

That night everyone couldn't sleep properly worrying about Celina and Bobby, and spent the whole night wondering how they both would be, somehow it was morning and we all reached there again in search of them, Today the weather was clear, finally one of our search party was successful, and they found Selina and Bobby unconscious in the cave, their bodies were white with cold, but thank God they were breathing, Then they were quickly brought to the hospital and soon they regained consciousness after three days.

We thanked God for their recovery, and returned from Zozowat Town with this bad accident’s memories in our hearts.

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Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

Thanks for the story, I wish you the best for this contest!

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by @dove11 For 𝐒𝐭𝐞𝐞𝐦𝐅𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧✍

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Thank You very much .

When I read your story, I recalled that I have read this type of story in a book. I am not sure, not the whole story but the incident which was spent a night amidst the snow. Anyway, you have nicely built your story.
Good luck with the contest dear @sur-rit.
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It was great to read your commendable comment, but I was also a little scared, lest I be accused of plagiarism of a story. Whereas it is not so. Many years ago, in a film made in Hindi, the hero and heroine were caught in a similar snowstorm when they skiing , and they took shelter in a guest house, but they later got married and became husband and wife. That story was also very different and special which is impossible to describe in words, it was fun watching it on the big screen.
Thanks a lot once again @senehasa.

I told you that because I couldn't recall the entire narrative. Only I can recall this portion. Usually, we can create a story out of any occurrence we can recall. That is not plagiarism in my opinion. Good luck with the contest.
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