Fiction story on skiing

Hello, @dove11 I am thrilled to see that you establish a new community on this site just for fiction and creative writers. I wish the steemFiction community the best of luck.

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I believe that the majority of community members are unfamiliar with the contest theme that you held for the first time. Because if they enjoy themselves in the snow, their creation will be successful. I spent a lot of time reading articles on the snow and skiing to gather information for my convenience, so I took the time to offer it. Let's get to the point now.

We were in The Alps to witness the Fresh Falling Snowfall and we were watching it … Bright - Oh bright, coming from the sky like fresh falling stars on the white ground.

Yes!!! We are heading up to see the Spectacular view of falling snow!!!

We were all sound asleep when we heard Dev shout, "Wake up everyone!!!! Come see this!!!"
We all woke up from our rest and came out of the van!

Dev, our guide was right when he said that our best chance to see falling snow was. Snow was still falling in the Swiss Alps in March. We felt it's freezing cold in Zozovat Town.

"Wowwww!!!!" Here we go!!!

I was still rubbing my eyes, amused awestruck and not believing what I was seeing.

Dev shouted again- Hey guys the dream of our trip is in front of you all ... you can see the falling snow in the Alps which we were least expecting in first week of March and are below average for this time of year – especially at lower altitudes.

We took our skiing gear from the van and ...

(Up to there your story, and this is mine.)

Snow is falling, and we all scream to get out of the van with our ski equipment. My husband, I, and my elder son have very good experience in skiing, but my daughter is not so clever at skiing. Though she was eager to ski, as it is challenging and it gives them a sense of excitement and freedom.

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Dev, our guide, had extensive skiing expertise. We all ascended the mountain and began skiing down a slope. Children and adults can be seen skinning down joyfully before coming back up and skiing down. My children were shouting with delight. Being in control of the bi-ski and traveling so quickly down the hill was amazing. My kids and I descended after my husband, and then our guide.

Suddenly, I heard my daughter cry in terror as we quickly descended. I shouted to the Dev and my husband who was in the down position as soon as I discovered her strange behavior. They recognized the problem and made an effort to contain my daughter, who was downing the mountain without control. Dev swiftly flipped her ski over, applied some foot padding, then flipped my daughter's ski. At her own speed, the daughter's ski started to twist and drop. We all shouted and go down fast to see her.

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If the ski had been allowed to fall down the hill at that speed without her control, she would have been killed. But thanks to God, only her spinal cord sustained damage. She needed treatment and bed rest for more than a month. She suffered a good deal, but she managed to escape. Thanks to Dev, we were able to save her from that level.

This is the tale of this competition, my dear friend. I am aware that is not very successful. But since participation is required, I share my experience. I would like to invite this competition to @josepha, @eliany, @chant @karianaporras, and @kouba01. The competition announcement can be found here.

Thanks for reading.