I am really happy to see you sharing post with us so nicely. But I am sorry that I can't evaluate your writing. Because there is a certain rule to work in any platform. None of us can work outside of that rule. According to Steemit platform rules you, need to clear achievement1 post from Newcomer community first. Only then you can post your writing in any community. Kindly subscribe to Newcomers Community first, then share details about yourself through achievement1 post, like other new users do. Thank you. 🙏stay blessed.