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RE: "SLC21/WK3: Managing Bleeding: The Basics of Controlling External and Internal Bleeding"
Student Name: @xkool24
Overall Grade: 8.7
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided an elaborative method applying a bandage on a wound, demonstrating a thorough understanding of the importance of first aid skills. | Though the answer to this task was on point but you missed a very important detail of isolating the wound site which could result in cross contamination | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 2 | Excellent work. I am impressed. Clearly outlined a step-by-step approach to applying a torniquet showing an understanding of the procedure. | [Grade: 2] | |
| Question 3 | listed the steps of managing a deep cut injury with uncontrolled bleeding with detail. Provided a good understanding of the difference between the types of blood loss such as arterial or venous bleeding. | The student missed out on one of the most important detail,ie, introducing himself as a first aider and dispersing the crowd in order to have a clear working field. Furthermore, another important detail is to not to move the patient unnecessarily in order to avoid any presumed injuries to the spine. Overall good work | [Grade: 1.2 |
| Question 4 | Created an informative description of the DRABC protocol as well as why not to apply pressure on the abdomen in case of this accident. | [Grade: 2] | |
| Question 5 | Successfully came up with an infographic explaining the steps to stop bleeding. | You need to reread your assignment post before submitting as sometimes very small mistakes, such as spelling mistakes in this picture, could cost you some points. Apart from this, always add a watermark of your name in such pictures. Hope this advice would be of value to you in future. | [Grade: 1.7] |
General Feedback: The student demonstrates a solid understanding of managing bleeding and procedures of controlling internal and external bleeding across diverse scenarios. Further improvement in providing detailed explanations and practical solutions in certain areas would greatly enhance the overall quality of the responses. Overall, good effort.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1