Village River, Relics of the Blue Throne King (Steemit Engagement Challenge Contest II | Create your original story)

in Colombia-Original2 years ago (edited)

Hello friends in the Colombia-Original community, how are you! I hope you are always in good health and well. Alright, on this occasion I want to participate in the Steemit Engagement Challenge Contest II | Create your original story. This program is fully supported by the Steemit Team @steemit-blog.

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The sun began to set making the atmosphere darker, a sign that night had come. The villagers returned to their homes, the atmosphere around the village seemed increasingly deserted. "Tuk tuk tuk" the sound of the bell sounded loudly, a sign that it was night.

Look at the night view in my village, everything looks blue, the dark sky is blue, the Raja Throne Blue river is also blue. Everything happened because there was history in the past so why did everything turn blue. This village is called the Blue Throne village.

Long ago, the Blue Throne village was ruled by a king whose crown was blue, on the blue crown there were trinkets made of gold. The royal building is made of selected blue stone, the king's throne is also made of special blue wood. All royal knick-knacks are blue. The king who leads the village by the community is better known as the Blue Throne King.

The Blue Throne King was very rich, his strength and troops were unlimited, his combat equipment was complete at that time. The king often robbed royal property from the countries he colonized. And level all other work to the ground. During his reign the king acted ruthlessly, and had many enemies from other Kingdoms. As a result many intruders tried to enter his territory to try to kill the King.

Once that night the King's wife was pregnant with their first child and was in the process of giving birth, welcoming the good news, that night the King held a big and festive party. The king is happy and happy.

That night, an intruder managed to enter the kingdom's territory, and managed to kill the King's wife and kill her child who was still in her stomach.

The king was very angry, all the palace guards were summoned and given the beheading sentence for their negligence. The king also ordered that any of his subordinates who managed to find the murderer would be rewarded with 1000 gold pieces. The King also intends to kill the entire family of the killer, all the residents around the killer, and also kill the King who leads them.

The king also strengthened the security of entry into his kingdom by making the Sea Toll the only entrance into the kingdom's territory. The king also ordered 10,000 of his workers to dig the ground around the royal gate, to a depth of 10 meters. So that later the Blue Throne Kingdom can no longer be entered by intruders except through only one road, namely the sea highway.

Finally what the king wanted was done, the kingdom was successfully surrounded by sea water with a depth of 10 meters. There is only one way to the kingdom, namely by sea highway.

A year later the kingdom was hit by a tsunami, all the foundations beneath it were unable to withstand the load, so that at that time the entire kingdom sank to the ground. Until all the inhabitants drown. This is the origin of the blue river.

What is the important message that can be taken from this incident, when you become a leader then be a good and fair leader, when you are in an emotional state you must be patient and don't make decisions before making decisions.

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 2 years ago 

A very creative story, the blue king surely suffered a lot with the death of his 2 loved ones, I hope they find the murderer even if that didn't change what happened at all.

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Sorry @nahela, I wasn't very careful. This story is not finished yet, there are 4 more paragraphs that I forgot to add. and now I've made the edits to add the trailing paragraph text. once again sorry for my negligence.

 2 years ago 

Hello friend, an interesting story, full of revenge, sometimes it is better to opt for justice although I know that not everywhere justice is fair. But carrying other people's death can be a hard thing to handle. Greetings and thanks for your entry.

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Sorry @franyeligonzalez, I wasn't very careful. This story is not finished yet, there are 4 more paragraphs that I forgot to add. and now I've made the edits to add the trailing paragraph text. once again sorry for my negligence.

Good luck.and keep fighting 😄

Ayo berjuang, walaupun yang ditunggu belum datang

Iya udh hbs power nih bestie.. 😅😅

Di cas lah, saya juga udah habis ni

Gk ada energi lg buat nulis kontes lagi mksdnya. Soalnya penyemangat nya gak muncul 😱😱😱

Ohh iya bener itu, mungkin gegara steem turun

Cerita yang menarik

Terimakasih sobat, gimana liburannya?

excelente historia amigo

Sekadar saran @miftahulrizky, nama tempat jangan diterjemahkan ke dalam bahasa Inggris, tetap pakai apa adanya. Yang kedua, harus dibuat lengkap lokasinya di mana. Karena postingannya juga dibaca di luar negeri, harus menyebutkan nama negaranya. Saleum.

Terimakasih atas saran yang sangat membangun bang , insyallah akan segera di perbaiki pada tulisan berikut nya.

Good job and tetap semangat.


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