RE: Steemit Engagement Challenge (week 2): Create your original story by @patience90
nobody knows where Mr Mercellous came from and nobody bothers to know
In most business areas, it is hard to actually know who is who since most people come from different directions. No one has that time to think or puts in the time to be finding out where the other is coming from. So long your business is not interrupted what do you care LOL
he pushed the door gentle and entered inside where he discovered another door leading to another room
I enjoy your use of the door, it makes me feel like I'm reading the South America Alcatel sorry lol. it was a happy ending for the people of Azito town but will also make the next group of gangs always watch out for anyone running businesses around their area.
What I learn from the story, it is good to know the people around you. the case of Azito town was for their good, what if it was for the bad, mean they all fell into the trap.
Great job my dear, I enjoy your story.
Thanks for your analysis. It made me realized that if I put more effort, I can be able to go places through story writing.
hahahahahaaha, for sure. Maybe you start looking in that direction, that could be your actual dream which you have been staying away from it.
Thanks for the advice