Flash contest: For a greener planet! 🌎 @Titi7

in Writing & Reviews3 years ago (edited)

I'm very happy to take part in this contest. I want to use this opportunity to thank all the founders , representative and member of #Writig&Reviews community for this lovely contest #greenerplanet. Below is my poem

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Mother nature

I stood and watched, I stood and watched,
I stood and watched them blossom,🌼🌸waving at me as the wind blows, dancing all over the place. Lovely melodies from the blue skies as the birds pass by ; what an experience, what an experience. I sat on the fluffy green grass still watching them blossom, what a beauty. I sat and watched, I sat watched, I sat and watched the pregnant soil struggling in labor. Finally it's bouncy children were born; growing step by step, day and night, and soon the tiny little trees were men, spreading their arms up high and wide . I went towards the trees and lay down on the weeds. What a lovely shade. I laid and watched, I laid and watched, I laid and watched around, first and second class animals milling and playing around , eating fruits and enjoying shade. Suddenly, I started crying; as some first class animals with huge machines folded nature and all that I had experienced. They killed themselves slowly as nature dies and finally they were swallowed in buttomless pits with no were to turn. I stood and watched , I stood and watched, as the the light of nature deems out.

Poem explanation

This poem talks about how beautiful and helpful nature or our environment was, and how human activities destroyed everything which turned to affect them

  • The first six verses or line talks about flowers and birds
  • The pregnant soil was personified
  • Bouncy children represents seedlings or small tress
  • Men represents giant tress
  • Arms represents branches with leaves to provide shade.
  • First class animals represents we Humans
  • Second class animals are just the animals
  • Folded represents destroyed
  • Bottomless pits represents famine, natural disasters, disease, drought and so on

Thank you

I invite @johnvin , @jimah1k and @gold25 to this lovely contest

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Thanks for the invite. Fantastic poem by the way, good luck to us✌️

Thanks for joining 👍

Wow..you entry is amazing
@titi7

Thanks bro🙏🏼

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