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RE: Stones and Curses

in Hot News Community14 days ago (edited)

Hi fantvwiki,

Your retelling of the Malin Kundang legend in "Stones and Curses" is engaging and captures the story's essence well, making it accessible for a wide audience. One suggestion, if I may give, is to add a bit about how Malin might have felt inside, which could make his choice even more powerful for readers. Also, describing the place a little more could help people picture the story better, especially those who don’t know much about Indonesia. Overall, it’s a meaningful piece, and these small changes could make it even stronger.

Overall, your work is impressive :)

#microwrite

cc: @joslud @solperez

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