poem with humility from one more user :) :(

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hello good one more poem one less poem :) read and give your opinion:

Hare poemas para que las ciegas la lean y le informen a sus amigas sordas y estas a su vez a las otras amigas sordas porque mi poesía no se compra ni vende ni se le da a cualquier persona mi poesía a veces ni es poesía, solía agarrar un papel todo feíto en la escuela miraba a mi alrededor con un mongol sin borrador tenía el reto de emular a cohelo, Benedetti y Oliverio enfocado en una cosa sacar una expresión de asombro de las niñas y lo curioso es que dejaba los poemas en anonimato, mientras mis amigos jugaban “a tocado, otros en la cancha”, yo me convertía en un moustro de la poesía literaria, en mi fase del liceo ya no era en anonimato pero si bajo perfil, conocí lo que eran las decepciones, engaños, sexo precoz y demás, “la realidad de la vida en fase 2”, llegue a querer no haber crecido de niño a adolecente, en un momento le done un poema a mi “ya ex amigo” que decía lo siguiente; “MIRA AL CIELO Y VERAS INFINITAS ESTRELLAS, ASI DE INFINITO ES EL DESEO QUE SIENTO DE QUE DESEES EN EL MISMO NUMERO DE ESTRELLAS QUE MIRAS TODAS LAS NOCHES ESTRELLADAS POR MI”, (consta con decir que fueron novios hasta la universidad hasta que ella le fue infiel), Xd otra ocasión fue a un primo (que por cierto no necesitaba de mi talento ya lo tenía todo desde bicicletas hasta BlackBerry jajajaja), a ese le done una que decía asi : “SI ME PERMITES EXPLORAR CADA CENTIMETRO DE TU CUERPO TE APUESTO MI VIDA Y LAS DE NUESTROS FUTUROS HIJOS QUE DESCUBRIRAS COSAS QUE NI SABIAS QUE TIENES Y SIENTES”, (estos ni 6 meses duraron jajaja) en resumen de este desahogo es que: “ YO SE QUIEN SOY, SE LO QUE DOY, SE DONDE ESTOY, SE A DONDE VOY, Y SE PORQUE AQUÍ ESTOY”, entonces porque razón y circunstancia de la vida del mundo las personas tiene la mala manía sadomasoquista de querer saber todo de todos, entrar en disputas con todos, querer dañarse entre todos… mis letras son mis letras y si las publico asi sea en el aire quien eres tu para tener autoridad por lo que transmite de mi cerebro hacia mis dedos y si es de ser entre tu y yo… créeme siempre seré yo..!!! fin.
Otra vez entre los oasis de mis sueños pude ver los destellos de la creación de los albas y tenían similitud contigo, vi la creación de la creación vi el fogueo del alfa y la omega, vi la timidez de la mujer y la cobardía del hombre, vi la nomenclatura de la escritura pura, vi la nada cuando era todo, vi lo psicotrópico que puede ser una persona bizarra, vi lo normalmente coherentes que son las personas con síndrome de Down vi su perfección en comparación a la de nosotros vi lo muy sobrevalorado que están los humanos hoy en dia, y por ultimo vi lo post apocalíptico que podríamos terminar todos aquí..!!

I will make poems for the blind to read and inform their deaf friends and these in turn to other deaf friends because my poetry is not bought or sold or given to anyone my poetry sometimes is not even poetry, I used to grab a paper all ugly at school I looked around me with a mongol without an eraser I had the challenge of emulating Cohelo, Benedetti and Oliverio focused on one thing to get an expression of astonishment from the girls and the funny thing is that I left the poems in anonymity, while my friends played "a tocado, others on the court", I became a moustro of literary poetry, in my high school phase was no longer in anonymity but low profile, I knew what were the disappointments, deceptions, early sex and so on, "the reality of life in phase 2", I came to want not to have grown from child to teenager, at one point I donated a poem to my "now former friend" that said the following; "LOOK AT THE SKY AND YOU WILL SEE INFINITE STARS, SO INFINITE IS THE DESIRE I FEEL THAT YOU WANT TO LOOK AT THE SAME NUMBER OF STARS THAT YOU LOOK AT EVERY NIGHT STARLED BY ME", (it goes without saying that they were boyfriend and girlfriend until college until she was unfaithful), Xd another time was to a cousin (who by the way did not need my talent and had everything from bikes to BlackBerry hahaha), to him I donated one that said so : "IF YOU ALLOW ME TO EXPLORE EVERY CENTER OF YOUR BODY I BET YOU MY LIFE AND THOSE OF OUR FUTURE CHILDREN THAT YOU WILL DISCOVER THINGS YOU DIDN'T EVEN KNOW YOU HAVE AND FEEL", (these didn't even last 6 months hahaha) in summary of this vent is that: "I KNOW WHO I AM, I KNOW WHAT I GIVE, I KNOW WHERE I AM, I KNOW WHERE I GO, AND I KNOW WHY I AM HERE", then because reason and circumstance of the life of the world people have the bad sadomasochistic mania of wanting to know everything about everyone, to enter into disputes with everyone, to want to harm each other .... my letters are my letters and if I publish them even in the air who are you to have authority for what transmits from my brain to my fingers and if it is between you and me... believe me it will always be me. .!!!! end. Again between the oasis of my dreams I could see the flashes of the creation of the albas and they had similarity with you, I saw the creation of the creation I saw the blanks of the alpha and the omega, I saw the shyness of the woman and the cowardice of the man, I saw the nomenclature of the pure writing, I saw the nothingness when it was everything, I saw how psychotropic a bizarre person can be, I saw how normally coherent people with Down syndrome are I saw their perfection in comparison to ours I saw how overrated humans are today, and lastly I saw how post apocalyptic we could all end up here. .!!

"Los unicos animales que engañan a los de su misma especie son los humanos" :)
"The only animals that deceive their own species are humans" :)

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Of course, the ultimate deception that humans delude themselves into is the illusion that they can live outside of God's will. Good writing, good photo. Great artistic post.

Thanks friend, I have great content that I would like to reflect on the #steemit platform but my lack of technology and more than that I am from Venezuela with the bad record that we have here, but the last thing that the human being loses out of good habit is the fighting force , I will investigate your profile my friend to see your content and react greetings and hugs and thanks hahahaha (And) "Together we are more" hahaha

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