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RE: La fiesta.

in Venezolanos Steem4 months ago (edited)

Hello @fannyescobar, Your narration manages to create a striking contrast between the light and festive atmosphere of the beginning of the evening and the growing anxiety that takes Juan when he begins to hear this haunting whistle, perfectly capturing the dramatic tension of the legend. The arrival of his friends, who eventually rescue him and bring him back to safety, adds a touching dimension to the story, recalling the strength of bonds and solidarity even in the darkest moments. This text, with its final touch of redemption and morality, pays beautiful homage to this fascinating legend by presenting it with authenticity and intensity.

Thank you for sharing this powerful story that reminds us of the depths of popular culture and beliefs, including bendiciones. #microwrite

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Gracias amigo por la visita le rinde honor ap socorro y la ayuda de los amigos. Gracias.

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