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RE: Technology In The Healthcare Industry- Crypto Academy Season Four Week Three- Homework Post For @yohan2on.
Hi @silencewan
Thanks for participating in the Steemit Crypto Academy
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| Rating criteria | Calculation out of 2 |
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| Quality of presentation | 1/2 |
| Originality | 1/2 |
| Compliance with topic | 1/2 |
| Clarity of language | 1/2 |
| Quality of analysis | 1/2 |
| Grand total | 5 |
This is average content. Your work is just too congested, I have even found lots of typing errors in it. always proofread your work and make it more presentable and readable.
From a research, security is still a major problem in the health industry, in the years of 2009 and 2017, it was notable that, over a 176,000,000 patients records got exposed from data breaches.
Always add a reference to such statistical information, otherwise, it might be considered plagiarism.
Total| 5/10
Thank you professor. I’ll take note of all said.